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Wonderful disease

Geplaatst: 28 sep 2012 17:27
door Wannabe
Love always gets you,
it tears people apart.
It is the reason for the loneliness
and the broken hearts

Most of the time it’s terrible,
but I can put you on ease.
If you meet the right person
it’s a wonderful disease.

Re: Wonderful disease

Geplaatst: 02 okt 2012 15:51
door BrILjanTje
one of the few poems where the rhyming flows naturally. Mostly I think it is just strained. Well done. I certainly hope it is true