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Sorry is good enough

Geplaatst: 02 sep 2009 20:22
door Imke
Okay, ten eerste: ik vind het geweldig om mensen te shippen en dan al helemaal als het slash is :') Dus dan ben je bij deze vast gewaarschuwd. Remember: de bandleden van McFly zijn echt niet gay in het echt! Ik vind het alleen leuk om ze samen te brengen, haha. Enjoy.

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‘Tom?’
‘Yes, Danny?’
‘Will you do me a favour?’
‘What kind of favour?’
Silence.
‘Tom?
‘Yes, Danny?’
‘Will you promise me something?’
‘What do you want me to promise you?’
Silence.
‘Will you never leave me? Please?’
Silence.
‘Of course I won’t, Danny. I thought you knew me better than that.’
‘You promise?
‘I promise.’
Silence.
‘Tom?’
‘Yes, Danny?’
‘I love you.’
‘I love you too, Dan.’

It was an ordinary Tuesday afternoon and we were sitting on a bench in the park. We were holding hands, while Danny had his head resting on my shoulder. I watched people going by. Some were with children, others alone. I couldn’t care about them. I was here with my Danny.
Everything seemed to be alright.
Well.
Seemed to be.

‘Tom?’
‘Yes, Danny?’
‘Why did you do it?’
Silence.
‘I don’t know.’
‘Oh.’
Silence.
‘Danny, you know I didn’t mean -’
‘I know, Tom. I just wanted to ask why you did it.’
Silence.
‘But you do regret it, don’t you?’
‘Of course I do! I’ve said that so many times, but you keep asking me. Yes, I regret it.’
‘Okay. That’s all I wanted to know.’

I stroked his hand and sighed. Danny was watching some boy and girl making out on the bench beside us, but didn’t say anything about them. I know he wanted to do the same with me, but I couldn’t find it in my heart to do that. Therefore I felt too guilty.
I wasn’t the victim. Danny was. I was wrong. Danny wasn’t.
I sighed again.

‘Danny?
‘Yes?’
‘I really regret it. I wish I didn’t do it, but it just happened.’
‘I know, Tom. You told me that before.’
‘Yes, but you need to know! I really didn’t want it to happen!’
Silence.
‘I know.’
‘You’re still mad at me, aren’t you?’
‘No, I’m not. If I was mad at you, I wouldn’t sit here, holding hands with you.’
Silence.
‘That’s true. You know I saw that girl yesterday?
‘What?’
‘I saw her.’
Silence.
‘Did you talk to her?’
‘Yes. I did.’
‘What did you say? What did she say? What happened?’
‘I told her that I made a big mistake. She said she wasn’t happy with it either. So we decided to forget it.’

Danny raised his head and looked at my face. He took his hand from mine and for a moment I was scared he was going to walk away. But he didn’t. He kissed my lips softly.

‘I’m glad you talked with her.’
‘Me too.’
‘Tom?’
‘Yes?’
‘I forgive you under one condition.’
Silence.
‘What condition?’
‘Don’t you ever kiss a girl again while I’m watching. Okay?’
Silence.
‘I will never do that again. I promise.’
Silence.
‘Tom? I love you so, so much.’

I smiled and kissed him.

‘I love you too, Danny.’

Re: Sorry is good enough

Geplaatst: 02 sep 2009 21:34
door Lessie
Aaaaaaah, wat zijn ze schattig samen :D Geniaal geschreven, Imke! Echt geweldig! Tom en Danny... :lol: Hahaha!
Mooi gedaan. =)

Re: Sorry is good enough

Geplaatst: 03 sep 2009 10:59
door Melian
Hahaha xD
Omg, aan de ene kant is het heel grappig en aan de andere kant zijn ze zoo schattig xD

Die stukjes "silence" er steeds tussendoor zijn heel sterk, mooi gedaan ^^
Ik zit op school en de bel gaat zo, dus dit keer geen lange reactie - maar deze is, eigenlijk net als al jouw schrijfsels, geweldig! :sweet

Re: Sorry is good enough

Geplaatst: 13 jan 2010 22:45
door Imke
Hihi, thanks girls! Ik wilde eens wat anders proberen dan mijn normale schrijfgedrag... Ben blij dat het dus in de smaak is gevallen. Dank jullie :D

Re: Sorry is good enough

Geplaatst: 09 feb 2010 11:58
door Laura
Oooohh toen ik die titel zag wist ik het meteen! McFly :liefde !
Niet te geloven dat ik hier nooit eerder heb gekeken, haha. Ik vond het wel een beetje raar om.. om.. Tom en Danny zo te lezen. Ik bedoel, het zijn Tom en Danny. :shock:
Tom heeft een vriendin enzo.
Ik zou nooit op het idee gekomen zijn, en wat dat betreft echt super leuk gedaan. En die titel, haha, die is gewoon geniaal :super