Fallen Angel

[Tesserell]

Een duoverhaal van mij en Eline, een vriendin! Het komt misschien wat raar over omdat we eigenlijk allebei een karakter schrijven, ik Yuwei en zij Sung Woo, maar ik heb het geprobeerd om te schrijven. En sorry dat het Engels is? xD Dat Engels zal trouwens niet overal even goed zijn...


Yuwei took the soup and turned it clockwise three times. She doesn’t know why, but it's a old in her family. Carefully, she drank some soup. Then Yuwei looked up to Sung Woo. 'Thanks for the soup. So... What about last night?'
'Ehm, well, I can't quite remember what happened... I hope you don't mind whatever happened?' He could clearly remember all of it, but honestly he was a bit ashamed of it, and if Yuwei was too, maybe it'd be better to just forget it ever happened.
‘I remember…’ Yuwei drank some more soup.
'Do you regret?' Sung Woo had to ask her.
‘No. Do you?’
'I don't know, I barely remember... I'm gonna get me some more soup, do you want too?' asked Sung Woo, trying to avoid another question ‘bout the night before.
‘What do you remember?’ Yuwei didn’t even answer his question.
'Ehm, well... The rain, the couch, more couch, and an awful lot of empty bottles' Sung Woo grinned.
Yuwei chuckled and almost choked in her soup. ‘So again, do you regret?’
The boy sighed and drank some of his soup
'I don't think making out with some beautiful girl is something you should ever regret,' was his evasive answer.
That was cute, thought Yuwei. She reddened. Though, it wasn’t very clear. Ah well, whatever. ‘We have to go to school..’
'Have fun, I'm going to stay here and have a great time with my new friend called Han Gover.' Sung Woo wasn’t planning on going to school today.
Before Yuwei could say something, the door bell rang. She looked at Sung Woo, who wasn’t planning on opening the door, so she stood up and walked towards the door. When she opened she saw a tall, handsome boy smiling at her.
'Well hello beauty? Is our loverboy over here too? Or do you know where to find the sugar - I'm out of mine,' the boy asked questionly.
Yuwei frowned. Beauty? ‘Don’t know when you lost your mind, but if you need him, Sung Woo is here.’ she told the guy. ‘Hey you, someone here for you.’ she yelled to Sung Woo.
He stood up and sighed, 'Oh, Ryuu, what are you doing here so damn early?'
'Need some sugar. But eh.. Who may this lovely young lady be?' The guy asked.
'You talk,' Sung Woo quickly said to Yuwei, 'I'll go get the sugar.'
'Ehm... Right...' she muttered and looked at the boy. He was grinning
'So, when is the- ehhh, wedding?' Ryuu asked as he observed Yuwei.
‘W-what??' Then Yuwei realised how this must look. 'O-oh no! We didn't... We aren't.... I'm just a... Friend. I guess.' The girl reddened.

[mena1998]

Heey, dezelfde titel als een verhaal van mij!
Sorry, maar ik kan (en dan bedoel ik ook echt KAN) het niet lezen. Ik ben zó slecht hierin. Maar ik ga het wel proberen. Hij lijkt me leuk.
Ik ga er mee bezig om het te vertalen. Als ik hem gelezen (Vertaalt) heb dan lees je wel weer een reactie van mij .

[Tesserell]

Haha, sorry van dezelfde titel! Als je het vervelend vind ga ik wel op zoek naar 'n andere. Ben benieuwd wat je ervan vind!

[mena1998]

Nee hoor, mag wel. Ik heb er geen last van .
Maar Leuk, snap nog niet waar het heen moet gaan maar wel leuk .
Ga door jullie twee.
Je kan van mij geen verbeterings foutjes in je taal verwachten...
Alleen wel dit:

But eh..

die twee puntjes. Doe er één of drie ...
Het komt nog een keer voor.

Verder niets (duh).
Doorgaan