Love always gets you,
it tears people apart.
It is the reason for the loneliness
and the broken hearts
Most of the time it’s terrible,
but I can put you on ease.
If you meet the right person
it’s a wonderful disease.
Wonderful disease
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BrILjanTje
- Potlood
- Berichten: 98
- Lid geworden op: 18 sep 2011 22:14
one of the few poems where the rhyming flows naturally. Mostly I think it is just strained. Well done. I certainly hope it is true
Kara Thrace and her special destiny? That sounds like a bad cover band.
I don't want to be human ! ... I'm a machine! And I can know much more!
I don't want to be human ! ... I'm a machine! And I can know much more!