she left without a trace
in an empty space
he could only once call her name
before the rain came
and flushed all his memory`s away
gone
Mooi kort. Goed woordgebruik!
Eerst leek de eerste regel te lang om lekker in het ritme te lopen en de tweede regel er mooi uit te laten stromen, maar het klonk heel goed. Goed gedaan!justme schreef:he could only once call her name
before the rain came
"It's the regular days, the ones that start out normal, those are the days, that end of being the biggest, and today, with you, it was beautiful." – Grey’s anatomy
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