The man without feeling

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glenovic
Fijnschrijver
Fijnschrijver
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Lid geworden op: 18 aug 2012 00:32
Locatie: Rotterdam

the man without feeling

It was a dark and cold night
When you lied next to my and i hold you tight
But we got into a fight
And now it's over whatever i write

Now you have left me
And there is no more we
And whatever i plea
You just say i want to be free

I wished that i knew what to do
That somebody gave me a clue
Doesn’t matter who
I just want you

When you left there arose a hole
Bigger then my fragile soul
Because of you i don't have a goal
Because i have lost control

Now i am on my own
And my hart is altering into stone
Because without you i feel so alone
And now i feel nothing whatever they throw

So now i am the man without feelings
My ego is to big for a conversation so thats the reason I write because writing is the best way to talk without being interrupted.
artikel
Computer
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Lid geworden op: 16 sep 2011 16:45

Ook weer een mooi gedicht en mooi beschreven. Echt leuk gedaan. Toch heb ik zelf één klein foutje gezien:
And my hart is altering into stone
In het Engels is hart "Heart"
It's okey to be afraid!
Ellie Goulding
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