Daarvoor moesten we als een van de opdrachten een ander eind schrijven.
En het leek me leuk die met jullie te delen! =)
Al het commentaar/hits/tips etc. zijn welkom en ik hoop dat mijn engels oké is xD
liefs
(page 531 in stead of Boromir reappeared.)
They all expected Boromir to appear again when they heard some noise. But they were all very surprised when they saw that it was Frodo.
“Frodo! Did you make a decision where to go?” asked Aragorn. He would rather not stay any longer on this place if there was a possibility to move on. While asking he noticed that it seems that Frodo was out of breath. Why?
“I thought that I made up my mind, but then...” Frodo started his story. But Gimli was to enthusiastic to let him finish.
“That's great news dear hobbit! Tell me where are we going?” smiled Gimli while he stood up to get his stuff packed.
“But what Frodo?” asked Legolas. “And where is Boromir?”
“I don't know where Boromir is, but I saw him not long ago. He wanted to speak to me about the destination of the ring. He wants to go to Minas Tirith with it. I told him that it doesn't seems like a good idea to me. Then he got angry and...”
Again Frodo was trying to tell the Fellowship the whole story when he got interrupted.
“What? Why did Boromir got angry?” It was Merry who wanted to know this.
“And why does he not discus this with us?” asked Pippin just after Merry.
“My dear hobbits, let Frodo finish his story,” said Aragorn signaling to Merry and Pippin to calm down a bit. Of course they were all curious about what did happen, but interrupting Frodo every time isn't making it better. Gimli also sat down again. Legolas eyes stared to Frodo while he was making some theories of his own. Only Sam had a better look on Frodo and saw that he was bleeding.
“Mr. Frodo! You first need some medical attention before you talk any further sir! You are bleeding!” he said while he ran to Frodo and took his arm to look closer to a wound. Now Aragorn looked shocked. He was wondering what happened between Frodo and Boromir.
“Tell your story while I take a look to your wounds,” told Aragorn to Frodo while he picked up some medical aids to help Frodo.
“Well, he told me to go to Minas Tirith. I told him that that in my opinion it wasn't the best option. He got angry and took his sword, and I took mine. He started to talk louder. He said that the Ring was his because it belongs to Gondor. He walked with his sword raised towards me. I raised my sword to protect myself, but the first hit of him scratched my arm. He raised his sword again. Then he said that I must give him the ring, someone with more power and aah!”
The Fellowship got shocked by this suddenly scream from Frodo. It was because Aragorn bound a strip of cloths as bandage. You could see at Frodo's face that it hurts. But the rest of the fellowship had a same kind of look.
“Boromir attacked you?” asked Legolas again like he didn't believe that Boromir would do that. And that was the problem. But you could see that Frodo had been attacked by something, but Boromir?
“No my dear boy, Boromir wouldn't do that, would he?” Also Gimli wasn't sure about this case.
“He did, but that isn't the only thing. Because he raised his sword again, but this time he tried to stab me true, I don't know the heart? It hurted so much that I fainted, but I don't have a wound I guess thanks to the Mitril vest. But I think I got a Big bruise..”
“No way!” whispered Aragorn next to Frodo. He was finished with the bandage and now looked very shocked. He did believe Frodo from the first word, but was very shocked by Boromirs action.
“But you guys don't even know the worst part.. He took the ring with him,” completed Frodo his story. To show him that he was speaking the truth, he opened his vest a bit. And indeed there was no ring on a chain any more. Everybody was quiet and very shocked. How could Boromir does something like this?
“Than there is no choice than to find him. If we don't than we have even bigger problems,” said Aragorn raising his voice. Everybody stood quickly up and started to packing as fast as they could.
“We should hurry. There is something coming, and I doesn't feels good,” told Legolas Aragorn. Aragorn nod and told everybody to hurry up even more. He, Legolas and Gimli helped with packing the stuff of the hobbits. And Sam wasn't going away from Frodo's side any more. Because now he could show everyone which problems that could cause. Merry, Pippin and Gimli were all quiet. It was strange to leave without one person, especially when you need to go after him.
And so went the Fellowship on another journey; getting the ring back from Boromir.
daarvoor excuses dat ik niet diep op je karakters in kan gaan, wat ik wel een beetje mistte was het gevoel hier in het stukje, het is allemaal vrij simpel geschreven en dat komt denk ik omdat het in engels is. Ik kan geen verschillende karakters uit elkaar halen door het gedrag van de karakters, daarbij vond ik Frodo zijn uitleg over het gevecht niet heel realistisch. Het wordt verteld alsof hij een boek aan het schrijven is... ik denk persoonlijk niet dat iemand zoiets op zo'n manier zou vertellen =) 